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		<title>10 Ways Writers Avoid &#8220;Said&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Feb 2011 13:07:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rita Merlow</dc:creator>
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		<category><![CDATA[defining fictional speakers]]></category>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today I&#8217;m noticing how authors carefully avoid over-use of the word, &#8220;said,&#8221; in conversations between characters. As I circle the &#8220;said&#8221; substitutes, I&#8217;m becoming more aware of the  possibilities and the whole exercise becomes a reading adventure.</p>
<p>So far I&#8217;m reading:</p>
<p>asked, argued, taunted, corrected, hinted, sighed, teased, muttered, giggled, snorted, blurted, exploded, demanded, objected, called, added, hissed, grimaced, whispered, screamed, and murmured &#8230; and the list goes on.</p>
<p>Hmm &#8230; what beginning writers think about! &#8212; A simple lesson in defining the speakers in fictional conversations.</p>
<p>I thought this lesson was more positive than my delving into the awful things that cows really eat these days. Yes, I found this in a young adult book at the bookstore. As much as I wanted to stop off at a hamburger joint yesterday, I kept getting visions of cows living off the weirdest stuff like the guts and brains of other cows, plus concrete dust. Yuk! How disgusting.</p>
<p>Now I wonder if I  would be better off eating my words today than the non-food items in my local grocery store.  While the author ponders this deep question, she hopes you will focus on the important word, &#8220;said,&#8221; and its many possible replacements.</p>
<p>Ps. In a future post I&#8217;ll give credit to the author of that fascinating book about disgusting things that animals eat. I think you might enjoy the enlightenment, or not!</p>
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		<title>You&#8217;re Either a Writer or You&#8217;re Not</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Feb 2011 02:58:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rita Merlow</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So said the stranger as he strode off into the crowd. Some say he was a dancer. Some say he was a pilot. Whoever he was, he meant what he said: You&#8217;re either a writer or you&#8217;re not.</p>
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